I MADE A CHANGE
I changed my poem. PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!!!
Alone
Im all alone but,
Surrounded by everyone.
No one but myself.
Noisey hallways, bratty kids,
Everyone's 'round me,
And yet I still hear nothing.
Giggles and laughter,
Never ever leave my lips.
I'll prove I am good,
If I ever get the chance.
I'm putting it in my blook sometime.
-Maxridelvr
Alone
Im all alone but,
Surrounded by everyone.
No one but myself.
Noisey hallways, bratty kids,
Everyone's 'round me,
And yet I still hear nothing.
Giggles and laughter,
Never ever leave my lips.
I'll prove I am good,
If I ever get the chance.
I'm putting it in my blook sometime.
-Maxridelvr
posted by maxridelvr at
6:32 PM
2 Comments:
A bit suicidal, but I luv it!
I'm writing a story about a phsycotic killer, so I think I will like as you said, your weird stories.
By
miss mcr, at 8:33 AM
Thanks, and if you have any suggestions for the story, go ahead. I need some ideas! Plus I don't even have a friggen plot, I'm just winging it.
-Maxridelvr
By
maxridelvr, at 6:23 PM
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